Wednesday, December 1, 2010

Mining for Pomegranates

One of the most wonderful things about being an author is revision--the chance to look at your work through new eyes and see things you missed the first time. This is especially true when it comes to NaNoWriMo novels, which are written at breakneck speed.
In a way, it's like miners trying to break through a mountain. They don't care about scenery or stability. But later, when the dust has settled and we have time to use the more delicate equipment in our toolbox, we start looking closer. Perhaps we'll open a new passage because one part is unstable and prone to cave-ins, or we'll widen one tunnel for easier access. But the best part is when the lamplight reveals a cavern full of sparkling gems. Each gentle tap opens up even more wonders to our sight.
It's also like making a fruit salad. You throw in whatever you can find in the cupboard and fridge, and only on the third or fourth helping that you identify that delightful taste lingering in your mouth. Pomegranate seeds? You don't remember putting them into the bowl, but it's so delicious you don't really care.
So as you sit down to edit a story--any story--don't think of it as a dull, boring task. Think of it as an opportunity to find something new.


  1. This is good!! Love it :)


  2. Editing certainly does add polish, detail and nuance to our writing. As much as some writers dislike it, I actually enjoy the editing phase.

  3. @ Galadriel,

    I love how you described writing as mining. It actually makes it sound better than what it is. Of course when I first read though your post I thought you said that all the mistakes were the jewels, but then I read it again and understood. Thanks for sharing!

    ~Son of the King~
    (ITML standing at 33,666 words)